The pollution here is deadly,
It hit Beijing heavily.
What a shame,
This is a mess, but who can you blame.
This was Activity 3 of Day 1 for Week 4 in the Summer Learning Journey. For this Activity I had to write a poem if I imagined to go to Beijing in China and how I would feel including with the air pollution there. I decided to create a poem that rhymes for this with only 4 lines.
Greetings Victoria,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing blog post from you. Everything that you do is always outstanding. The adjective words that you've used are interesting. Your poem is very inspiring to me. My favourite verse is the pollution here is deadly. That sentence is excellence.
Nice Work!
Kia ora Victoria,
ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent poem you have constructed, It is a well written piece. You have done a really great job of talking about the main points that you learnt about China’s air pollution.
This poem just rolls of the tongue, it has so much rhythm I can hear it when I read it aloud! My favourite part is the ‘what a shame, this is a mess, but who can you blame?’. This really leaves the audience thinking wow, the pollution is heavy because of us.
Well done for nailing this task!
Keep up the awesome work!
Blog you later!
Georgia E