Great to see you doing the Winter Learning Journey also I love our poem and also the picture that you picked for your poem it really suits what your poem is about. Keep it up Victoria.
I really like your poem that you have wrote. You made me hungry when you brought up cookies. I think you just have to add more feeling remembering that this poem has to be sort of about your emotions.
Thank you Mia I tried to add more information about my emotions but other things kept popping up in my head instead of the emotions and I thought there were really good ideas so then I added them.
Hi Victoria,
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you doing the Winter Learning Journey also I love our poem and also the picture that you picked for your poem it really suits what your poem is about. Keep it up Victoria.
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Cecillia
Thanks Cecillia for the great support and encouragement
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ReplyDeleteI really like your poem that you have wrote. You made me hungry when you brought up cookies. I think you just have to add more feeling remembering that this poem has to be sort of about your emotions.
But anyways great work
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Thank you Mia I tried to add more information about my emotions but other things kept popping up in my head instead of the emotions and I thought there were really good ideas so then I added them.
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