This week for writing we worked in small groups to create our own answers in 50 words exact to why Kokako Lodge is a great place to take yr 7/8 students on camp. I worked with Nyjah and Chavda and to do this listed ideas by look at our diaries, camp photos, LS2 writing rubric, and outside the box. We were also challenged to use these language features - simple sentence, compound sentence, complex sentence, a comma, correct beginning and end sentence punctuation, an exclamation mark, a simple, and brackets. Using any of them would earn us 5 points for one. After completing our 50 words, we had a total of 90 points. We also made a screen castify about this, and you can watch it above.
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ReplyDeleteand I love how you did that camp vidow keep up with the good work !
Kia Ora Victoria, my name is Alvin from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your 50 word challenge we had a 100 word challenge before but I fogot what is was about but it was fun!. was your 50 word challenge fun?. great work that is amazing!
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