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Sunday, 9 July 2017

The Beached Whales - Winter Learning Journey | Activity 9 |


For this Winter Learning Journey activity I read a story about how local people helped 300
dead whales. I had to write/describe about how they helped the whales and I added a picture to
view what they were doing and to go with the text.
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  1. Eric15 July 2017 at 15:39

    Hi Victoria,
    I think you should make your DLO more clear, for EG: move your text down and fill the space. Well Done!
    Eric

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  2. Ohhsen18 July 2017 at 23:23

    Hi Victoria. It's sad to hear that whales are dying from this. Hopefully what locals are doing is enough to save them. Keep up the great work.

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  3. daniel20 July 2017 at 19:00

    Hi Victoria
    I felt really sad when I heard those whales got stuck on the beach. It must have been horrible for them. Keep up the fabulous work.
    Daniel

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  4. Alex21 July 2017 at 14:04

    Hi Victoria
    It's sad that so many whales died on that beach, do you think that they should build a wall to stop the whales from being beached?
    Great work

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