For this next Summer Learning Journey activity, we looked at a young woman named Malala Yousafzai. I've heard about her before, and her story is very inspirational. She is a Pakistani activist who wants female education. But she is also a survivor and fighter. Malala survived an assassination attempt, and has since recovered. She lives her life continuing her career, and is currently 22 years young. Malala created a children's book called "Malala's Magical Pen". Inspired by that, our task was to write a short story/narrative about anything. This is a made up story called "The Man on the Moon" about a boy called George and the mysterious far away person on the moon, who he talks to at night. Enjoy!
Hey Victoria!
ReplyDeleteI seen that you just posted this activity so I decided to comment. This is a great D.L.O. Your story was really detailed, and I love the expression at the start, it made the story hook people in.
Keep up the great work!
Blog you later!
~ Florence
Well done on posting and continuing to participate in the SLJ this year. What could you do to be a climate changemaker like Malala, Victoria? Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Victoria,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described the smaller details in your story, like how hot it was and how far the light shone. I also liked how you even gave your story a title. Do you like writing stories?
Hej Victoria,
ReplyDeleteThe creativity this writing is made up of!!! Aww I loved that ending, it's cute!!
Narratives seem to be something you enjoy! Do you write narratives frequently?
Sincerely,
Riiana