Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Kaitlyn's blog. I commented on her SSR Selfie post. She did a great job in my opinion. I was interested in what Kaitlyn read this week since I did an SSR Selfie for my book too. I really liked the D.L.O layout and the information she also included besides the summary. I also liked her blurb because she tells us it is her favourite book and little bits in and about the book. She also included the extra detail about what she had to do, to complete the SSR Selfie. I wanted to know something from the book that she liked. 

Here is a link to her post and my comment below - SSR Selfie

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Florence's blog. I commented on her Finished art work blog post. She did a good job. I have finished my quatrefoil artwork too and came to her blog to see hers. I wasn't able to see the image she inserted but I am sure she is proud of it and it looks amazing. I liked how she included small details in her blurb, but I wanted to know how long it took to finish and make in total.

Here is a link to her post and my comment below - Finished Artwork

Blog Commeting

This week I decided to comment on Nyjah's blog. I commented on her Graphics Flower Designs post. I think Nyjah did fantastic work. I really enjoyed seeing what she has been doing in Tech. I liked how she included the important detail that makes her blurb understanding like what she chose out of the four options and her color choice. I also liked how she included her personal view of things. It was thoughtful to put an image of a bunch of other flowers her classmates made. I wanted to know what she used to make the flowers and how long it took.

Here is a link to Nyjah's blog post and my comment below - Graphics / Flower Design

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Viliami's blog. I commented on his Maori blog post. I think his blog post was great. We also did the same activities in Maori but I wanted to hear someone else's POV and what they managed to do. I liked how he explained everything that happened in simple detail and used a photo of the task that he managed to complete. I also like how he provided information he found on his research. I thought it was a good idea for him to put what Parihaka was just for people who didn't know it. I wanted to know if he found it hard looking for Parihaka on the map. 

Here is a link to Viliami's blog post and my comment below - Maori//Parihaka

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Angelica's blog. I commented on her Character Web blog post. I think she did good job. I was curious to know what she has been doing for her reading. I've also used character web before around last year to a Roald Dahl book. I like how she explained in a brief description what to do when filling out one or creating one. I also liked how the D.L.O was simple and clear for viewers to understand. I'd like to know what book she picked the character to do from since she didn't mention it in the blurb. 

Here is a link to Angelica's blog post and my comment below - Character Web

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on one of Kaitlyn's blog post. It was her Myths, Legends, and Fairytales post for reading. I think she did a great job. I've done this reading task too and liked her detailed and descriptive blurb. It was als good that she explained what self monitoring is. She made her blurb very descriptive and described a lit in her blurb what things were that she talked about.

Here is her blog post and my comment below - Myths, Legends, and Fairytales

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Nicole's blog. I commented on her show and tell blog post. In my opinion Nicole did a fabulous job. I also made a show and tell blog post for writing as well. I really enjoyed reading each of her pieces of writing. I also liked how she explained how she had to use more descriptive words and make the "show" more interesting. I really liked her "show" writing because it was more detailed and described much more than the "tell" which is what it is suppose to be. I wanted to know if she always uses "show" in her writing or did she used to use "tell". 

Here is the link to Nicole's blog and my comment below - Show and Tell poster

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Lukah's blog. I commented on his Audio book blog post. I think he did a fantastic job. I have also had to make a audiobook in writing aswell. I really liked his narration of the story he had made and I thought he did a good job for only and 18 sentence narrative. I liked how Lukah included what he learnt from the lesson in the blurb. I wanted to ask him if he thought writing an only 18 sentence narrative was hard and if recording took more than a single try. 

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Karlos's blog. I commented on his Maori blog post. I thought his work was great. I also had Maori and made a blog post about it. I liked how he explained what Matariki is because that is what we were learning about this week. I also liked how he talked about what we did in maori in a simple description. I wanted to know if he was able to complete the Maori word search and find all the words.

Here is the link to Karlos's blog and my comment below - Maori