Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Kaitlyn's blog. I commented on her SSR Selfie post. She did a great job in my opinion. I was interested in what Kaitlyn read this week since I did an SSR Selfie for my book too. I really liked the D.L.O layout and the information she also included besides the summary. I also liked her blurb because she tells us it is her favourite book and little bits in and about the book. She also included the extra detail about what she had to do, to complete the SSR Selfie. I wanted to know something from the book that she liked. 

Here is a link to her post and my comment below - SSR Selfie

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Florence's blog. I commented on her Finished art work blog post. She did a good job. I have finished my quatrefoil artwork too and came to her blog to see hers. I wasn't able to see the image she inserted but I am sure she is proud of it and it looks amazing. I liked how she included small details in her blurb, but I wanted to know how long it took to finish and make in total.

Here is a link to her post and my comment below - Finished Artwork

Blog Commeting

This week I decided to comment on Nyjah's blog. I commented on her Graphics Flower Designs post. I think Nyjah did fantastic work. I really enjoyed seeing what she has been doing in Tech. I liked how she included the important detail that makes her blurb understanding like what she chose out of the four options and her color choice. I also liked how she included her personal view of things. It was thoughtful to put an image of a bunch of other flowers her classmates made. I wanted to know what she used to make the flowers and how long it took.

Here is a link to Nyjah's blog post and my comment below - Graphics / Flower Design

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Viliami's blog. I commented on his Maori blog post. I think his blog post was great. We also did the same activities in Maori but I wanted to hear someone else's POV and what they managed to do. I liked how he explained everything that happened in simple detail and used a photo of the task that he managed to complete. I also like how he provided information he found on his research. I thought it was a good idea for him to put what Parihaka was just for people who didn't know it. I wanted to know if he found it hard looking for Parihaka on the map. 

Here is a link to Viliami's blog post and my comment below - Maori//Parihaka

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Angelica's blog. I commented on her Character Web blog post. I think she did good job. I was curious to know what she has been doing for her reading. I've also used character web before around last year to a Roald Dahl book. I like how she explained in a brief description what to do when filling out one or creating one. I also liked how the D.L.O was simple and clear for viewers to understand. I'd like to know what book she picked the character to do from since she didn't mention it in the blurb. 

Here is a link to Angelica's blog post and my comment below - Character Web

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Fau's blog. I commented on her emotive language post. I think Fau did superb with her poster she created about emotive language. I know about this type of language because it is used when writing persuasive texts and is what we are learning about. I really liked how Fau included a variety of examples for a list of emotive words, and an example of an emotive language sentence. This gives people a better understand and an idea of emotive words/language. I also liked how she used images to go with her texts to make it more interesting. I wanted to know if she finds it easy to turn a regular sentence or informative sentence into a emotive one.

Here is a link to her blog post and my comment below - Emotive Language

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Charlize blog. I commented on her Foundations blog post. I thought her and her group did an amazing job on working to create the presentation I am in a different group than her so I thought I could learn about what they are doing by looking at her work. I was really surprised by the good work and all the image refrences. In the first slide they explained what types of foundations there are then in different slides they showed what they looked like. I really liked how well they put the presentation together and how the images they created themselves are clear and neatly done. I also asked Charlize how did they found out what the foundations looked like and if they re-created them from the videos they watched or just put examples of them for the images of the foundations.

Here is the link to Charlize's blog post and my comment below - Foundations

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Chris's blog. I commented on his Angles blog post. I thought he did a good job. I also learnt about angles and created a D.L.O showing them with objects. I really enjoyed looking at the items Chris found to represent the angles. I also seen how he used maths words like "estimate" in his blurb. I liked how he explained what the degrees are of the angles that he did.

Here is his post and my comment below - Angles

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Sakina's blog. I commented on her Tengu Lessons blog post. I thought that she did a amazing job. I have also made a blog post about Tengu. I really liked how she had a description about tengu in the beginning of the presentation because the viewers now what the tengu is. I also really liked how she had photos of tengu which also gives them an idea of what the tengu looks like. I really liked the lessons and summaries of the tengu stories Sakina completed.

Here is a link to Sakina's blog post and my comment below - Tengu Lessons

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on one of Kaitlyn's blog post. It was her Myths, Legends, and Fairytales post for reading. I think she did a great job. I've done this reading task too and liked her detailed and descriptive blurb. It was als good that she explained what self monitoring is. She made her blurb very descriptive and described a lit in her blurb what things were that she talked about.

Here is her blog post and my comment below - Myths, Legends, and Fairytales

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Farzana's blog. I commented on her Dialogue & Monologue blog post. I thought her work was great. I've created a similar blog post about dialogue and monologue too.I liked the description of the scene in the first slide and also the short summart of the video that she watched in the blurb. I really enjoyed reading the conversations between them and their thoughts if they were alone. I was curious and asked Farzana if it was somehow difficult to think about what two people might say in a scene or what someone might think.

Here is a link to Farzana's blog post and my comment below - Dialogue & Monologue narrative

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Nicole's blog. I commented on her show and tell blog post. In my opinion Nicole did a fabulous job. I also made a show and tell blog post for writing as well. I really enjoyed reading each of her pieces of writing. I also liked how she explained how she had to use more descriptive words and make the "show" more interesting. I really liked her "show" writing because it was more detailed and described much more than the "tell" which is what it is suppose to be. I wanted to know if she always uses "show" in her writing or did she used to use "tell". 

Here is the link to Nicole's blog and my comment below - Show and Tell poster

Blog Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Lukah's blog. I commented on his Audio book blog post. I think he did a fantastic job. I have also had to make a audiobook in writing aswell. I really liked his narration of the story he had made and I thought he did a good job for only and 18 sentence narrative. I liked how Lukah included what he learnt from the lesson in the blurb. I wanted to ask him if he thought writing an only 18 sentence narrative was hard and if recording took more than a single try. 

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Karlos's blog. I commented on his Maori blog post. I thought his work was great. I also had Maori and made a blog post about it. I liked how he explained what Matariki is because that is what we were learning about this week. I also liked how he talked about what we did in maori in a simple description. I wanted to know if he was able to complete the Maori word search and find all the words.

Here is the link to Karlos's blog and my comment below - Maori

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Nicoles's blog. I commented on her Nervous System blog post. I think she did a great job. I have also made a blog post about all the tasks I have completed. I liked the layout of how she put all the DLOs. I also liked the description/blurb of the blog post, it was simple but explained what was going on in the post. I just asked Nicole if her and her group found the task difficult in anyway and if she thinks that she should be completing work faster or if she just wants to complete the work faster.

Here is a link to Nicole's blog post and my comment below - The Nervous System

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on nicole's blog on the divider. I thing she did a great job. I also made a post about the divider. I liked the colors on her DLO and the layout of the maths game. I wanted to know if the divider game helped her with her divisions.

Here is a link to here blog post and my comment below - The Divider

Cyber-smart blog commenting

L.I: To write a positive, thoughtful, and helpful comments.
This week for cyber-smart we went over how to make smart comments and that is positive, thoughtful, and helpful. Everyone in the class was given 3 or 2 peoples blog to comment on. I was given 3 and they were - Nicole, Jayden and Fanini. We had post the 3/2 comments we did on a google slide and explain them. I also linked the home page of each person and a link to the blog post that I commented on.

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Raera's blog post. I commented on her Whakatauki post. I think she did a fantastic job. I also finished coming up with a team Whakatauki with my group. I really liked her Whakatauki her and her team came up and how it relates to them as a team. I also like their emblem they made as well. I just wanted to know if she found coming up with a Whakatauki hard in anyway because my team did struggle for a bit before coming up with it.

Here is a link to Raera's blog and my comment below - Whakatauki

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Kaitlyn's blog. I commented on her Duffy Assembly blog post. I think she did a good job. I also went to the Duffy Assembly and made a blog post about it. I liked her detailed explanation of what happened. I also liked how the blurb includes a good description of what the guests - Tayla and Matt said. I liked the 2 images she used in the blog post as well. I just wanted to know if she enjoyed Duffy assembly.
Here is a link to Kailtyn's blog post and my comment below - Duffy Assembly

Blog Commenting

Today I commented on Matthew's blog. I commented on his place value house blog post. I think he did a great job. I also did the same activity for maths. I really liked how his house was very neat and how he used H, T, and O in shorted way of saying hundreds and etc, I though it was a smart idea. I also liked how in the description, he let us know what he learnt in the maths session and what it is. I wanted know if he found using place value to subtract, was hard in anyway.
Here you can find Matthew's blog post and my comment below - Place Value