L.I: To buddy conference to start edit and check writing.
I learnt to post comments about my opinions/advice/suggestions on others work in this occasion, others narrative. I learnt this by partnering with a person in my group and reading through their narrative to check if I can comment on anything that I think can be fixed or maybe better. My partner commented on my narrative also and gave me their suggestions,advice and questions. Here I show my comments and what I commented on and their comments and what they commented on. (The first 3 are mine)