Writing Self Evaluation

Is plastic the best option?

Have you ever thrown out a piece of plastic without thinking about it? You might not have known how effective plastic is to the environment and waterways. Not only plastic bags, but plastic bottles as well. Things like this take 400 years just to break down! It’s killing our marine animals and polluting the environment.

The earth is full of pollution, and a big percent of it is plastic waste. This is why we need to reduce the amount of plastic we use in our daily life to help save our planet. This could be done by replacing them with reusable items instead. A materialed bag instead of a plastic bag, and a hard bottle instead of a plastic bottle. Slowly, this could help decrease the amount of landfill spreading and adding in our countries.

Although plastic is very unhealthy for the air, marine animals, and land, it is a useful item. Sometimes these items even could be re-used another time. Plastic bag help us carry any items we bought from the store and sometimes we decided to buy a plastic bottle. But the bottle you bought could even cost more than are-usable one, and the plastic bag you got wouldn’t help you bag your items the next time you go shopping.

Plastic bottles and bags, aren’t the best choice but still are still an option. You could help care for the planet just by using a single item that could last a long while. Next time you see a bit of plastic, pick it up before it gets anywhere it shouldn’t need to be. Care for the planet.

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With a partner, we marked our easstle sample with the LS2 writing rubric. I worked with Nyjah to rate our explanations for the Punctuation, Vocab, Organisation, Sentence Structure, Structure and Language, and Ideas used in them. We also went into detail by explaining our answers with self check and partner check. To summarise the self evaluation I gave myself R4 in Punctuation, R3 in Vocab, R4 in Organisation, R4 in Sentence Structure, R4 in Structure and Language, and R4 in Ideas.