L.I: To write basic paragraphs
This week for writing we had to make an 18 sentence explanation on earthworms digestive system because last week was a 10 sentence explanation. We are working on making basic paragraphs this week. Each paragraph was 2 sentence that had a statement and explanation. First we watched a video on showing the earthworm digestive system which has 7 steps so in total we will have 2 sentences in the introduction, 2 sentences for the 7 paragraphs in the explanation, and 2 sentences in the 1 paragraph in the conclusion that adds up to 18 sentences. We used the template document from last week as well. The 7 steps are - Mouth, Pharynx, Esophagus, Crop, Gizzard, Intestine, and anus. Mr Wong wrote the first paragraph for the mouth by getting the information from us for what he was going to write down. Then in our separate reading groups we had to make up a paragraph for the pharynx step then we came up with our own for the rest. We could keep is simple then make it more detailed later on. If we needed to, we could watch the video again which I did and so did a lot of other people as well. Like last week with our 10 sentence explanation, we couldn't have more than 18 or less than 18. If we were thinking, we would that we could also use the explanation for our inquiry purposes.
Here is the Video we made the 18 sentence explanation on - Earthworm Digestive System
Malo lelei Victoria,
ReplyDeleteI really like your 18 sentences Explanation. Your introduction is really interesting it talks alot about what are the earthwroms 7 steps in the Digestive system. Also your title sounds interesting to.Your blurb Explains about what you did and why you did it. Keep up the good work! Kaitlyn Sikulu