L.I: To compare explanations with reports.
This week for writing we had to write a 10 sentence explanation. So that we could compare a information report with a explanation writing. We had to use a planning template. We had to write an explanation on how aluminum cans are made. The explanation had to be only 10 sentences long. The template had an introduction the explanation and the conclusion. I had two sentences in my introduction, two sentence in my first paragraph and 1 in each of the rest of paragraphs for the steps, and 2 sentences in the conclusion. We did this because last week some of us got confused with a information report and an explanation. We watched a video on Venus fly traps with Mr Wong for an example and looked at a few sites. Mr Wong made a example of a 10 sentence explanation and a 10 sentence information report. Then we watched a video about how aluminum cans are made and wrote the 10 sentence explanation. We couldn't write anything more or anything less.
Great attempt at a 10 sentence explanation, Victoria. Your introduction and conclusion are well done. I like your connection to steel cans as a way to introduce a similar object but processed in a different way.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you should be thinking about is how many ideas you have put into each sentence. Are each of those explanation paragraphs only one sentence each?