For activity 3 of Day 4 from the Summer learning journey which also a bonus activity, we had to watch 3 clips from the previous Te Matatini festivals. Then make a blog post and rank the performances in our favourite to least favourite and then explain why we gave them the ranking that we did.
#1 - Te Puku o Te Ika
In my opinion this one was the best because because the rhythm of the guitar was very good and the singing went along with it beautifully and the all of them were singing together and not one person was singing faster or slower than the others. I also liked how in the beginning, it was at first quiet but enough so you could hear them but then it got louder and I think more of the people started to sing and it just went well with the whole song.
#2 - Tamatea Arikinui
In my opinion this one was the second best because I really liked the poi moves because they go with the song and beat/rythm of the guitar and the singing was great but there were a few things of why it wasn't as good as the first because I could see a few people sometimes late to do something but it was still good.
#3 - Te Iti Kahurangi
In my opinion this one was the least best but the singing was good and the rythm and beat of the guitar was good as well and the singing went with it like all of of the other performances but just somethings just didn't go with it or suit it and that's why it wasn't as god as the others.
Hi Victoria,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this post . You did organize your text so well and that made it easy to read and also you explained your reasons in detail.
For the future I want you to consider to use a table to sort your text even more. Tables are very useful specially when the text is making comparisons. Furthermore, I want you to proofread your text carefully or send it to a peer for feedback before publish it. All these strategies can help you improve your written immensely.
Keep up the good work!
Kia Kaha,
Patricia
Hello Victoria
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing this summer learning journey activity. Like you, I also think that Te Puku o Te Ika is the best. It sounds amazing. Keep up the excellent work Victoria.
Daniel